Sam, this is coming together quite nicely; the front cover has a clear genre and the image is fairly unique- it would be better centred I feel and although it has a name of the artist the lead story text is very hard to read. More needed to fill space. Don't overcomplicate with many fonts- keep it sleek and readable. The DPS has a large image and would be cut in the middle when stapled so consider the layout. Main page to work on is contents- this needs a lot of work.
Sam, this is coming together quite nicely; the front cover has a clear genre and the image is fairly unique- it would be better centred I feel and although it has a name of the artist the lead story text is very hard to read. More needed to fill space. Don't overcomplicate with many fonts- keep it sleek and readable. The DPS has a large image and would be cut in the middle when stapled so consider the layout. Main page to work on is contents- this needs a lot of work.
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